雅思雅思教父刘洪波:建筑类雅思作文高分范文及点评(3100字)

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雅思教父刘洪波:建筑类雅思作文高分范文及点评

雅思教父刘洪波2010权威作品

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从零开始,单词、词组、句式、思想

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最新研发最简化15句写作框架模板

涵盖雅思题库各类型高分范文

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1. 建筑风格

Modern buildings are appearing in large numbers but some people believe that we should build our buildings in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, an interesting trend has emerged. Countries with long histories and rich cultures have been modernizing the quickest, especially in terms of architecture. Many have criticized this as not respecting traditional culture. While traditional architecture should be protected, however, I feel it is not necessary to stop building modern structures as we move forward.

One reason for this is that modern buildings are more practical and comfortable to live and work in. While traditional buildings might look nice from the outside, they are often not very user-friendly. Modern buildings usually have lots of windows and light and are clean and energy efficient. Surely this will make those inside them happier.

Another point to consider is that modern buildings will give a good impression to those visiting from abroad. Consider Beijing during the Olympics, for example. Many foreigners were surprised to see all of the stunning new building designs. In the long run, this will probably attract more business and tourists to the country.

Of course, traditional architecture still has its value. Everyone loves visiting famous historical places and admiring architectural styles from throughout history. We should protect and appreciate such places for future generations, but at the same time, we don't have to live in the past.

Ultimately, each city needs to find its own balance between "old" and "new" when it comes to building styles, but modern buildings are for sure a positive thing. After all, if we don't continue to explore new building styles we won't be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like.

(264 words)

Harvey点评:

写作线索:首段,现代建筑必要;第二段,因为现代建筑的实用性和舒适性;第三段,代表城市现代化;第四段;让步,传统建筑的价值。末段总结。

文中第三段的观点不够有力。其实现代建筑的优点直接分实用性和舒适性两个段落来重点阐述即可。比如实用性,现代化都市人口密度比以前大,摩天大楼skyscraper提高了城市土地的使用效率。

本文末句很有趣味,再仔细读读:After all, if we don't continue to explore new building styles we won't be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like.(毕竟,如果我们不继续开发新建筑的风格,我们的下一代将不会知道我们这一代的历史是什么样)历史是相对的,对于我们的子孙来说,我们现在的现代化建筑将成为他们眼里的古代建筑。

先学习下面的词汇和短语,然后再重读范文,体会它们在文中的运用

词汇

emerge vi.显现出来

architecture n.建筑物

practical adj.实用的

user-friendly adj.用户友好的,方便用户使用的

stunning adj.足以使人晕倒的,极好的

admire v.赞美,钦佩,羡慕

ultimately adv.最后,

短语

in terms of在...方面

move forward前进

in the long run从长远看

for sure确实

after all 毕竟

let sb. do sth. 让某人做某事

三分钟熟读或背诵本文最实用的三个句子

* In recent years, an interesting trend has emerged.

* One reason for this is that modern buildings are more practical and comfortable to live and work in.

* After all, if we don't continue to explore new building styles we won't be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like.




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雅思教父刘洪波:建筑类雅思作文高分范文及点评

雅思教父刘洪波2010权威作品

《最简化雅思写作》

8月光芒上市

从零开始,单词、词组、句式、思想

完全应对官方四大评分标准

最新研发最简化15句写作框架模板

涵盖雅思题库各类型高分范文

幽默通俗的语言手把手教出写作高分

中国区前任雅思考官强力推荐

1. 建筑风格

Modern buildings are appearing in large numbers but some people believe that we should build our buildings in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, an interesting trend has emerged. Countries with long histories and rich cultures have been modernizing the quickest, especially in terms of architecture. Many have criticized this as not respecting traditional culture. While traditional architecture should be protected, however, I feel it is not necessary to stop building modern structures as we move forward.

One reason for this is that modern buildings are more practical and comfortable to live and work in. While traditional buildings might look nice from the outside, they are often not very user-friendly. Modern buildings usually have lots of windows and light and are clean and energy efficient. Surely this will make those inside them happier.

Another point to consider is that modern buildings will give a good impression to those visiting from abroad. Consider Beijing during the Olympics, for example.

Dygqva雅思教父刘洪波建筑类雅思作文高分范文及点评

Many foreigners were surprised to see all of the stunning new building designs. In the long run, this will probably attract more business and tourists to the country.

Of course, traditional architecture still has its value. Everyone loves visiting famous historical places and admiring architectural styles from throughout history. We should protect and appreciate such places for future generations, but at the same time, we don’t have to live in the past.

Ultimately, each city needs to find its own balance between “old” and “new” when it comes to building styles, but modern buildings are for sure a positive thing. After all, if we don’t continue to explore new building styles we won’t be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like.

(264 words)

Harvey点评:

写作线索:首段,现代建筑必要;第二段,因为现代建筑的实用性和舒适性;

第三段,代表城市现代化;第四段;让步,传统建筑的价值。末段总结。

文中第三段的观点不够有力。其实现代建筑的优点直接分实用性和舒适性两个段落来重点阐述即可。比如实用性,现代化都市人口密度比以前大,摩天大楼skyscraper提高了城市土地的使用效率。

本文末句很有趣味,再仔细读读:After all, if we don’t continue to explore new building styles we won’t be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like.(毕竟,如果我们不继续开发新建筑的风格,我们的下一代将不会知道我们这一代的历史是什么样)历史是相对的,对于我们的子孙来说,我们现在的现代化建筑将成为他们眼里的古代建筑。

先学习下面的词汇和短语,然后再重读范文,体会它们在文中的运用

词汇

emerge vi.显现出来

architecture n.建筑物

practical adj.实用的

user-friendly adj.用户友好的,方便用户使用的

stunning adj.足以使人晕倒的,极好的

admire v.赞美,钦佩,羡慕

ultimately adv.最后,

短语

in terms of在...方面

move forward前进

in the long run从长远看

for sure确实

after all 毕竟

Dygqva雅思教父刘洪波建筑类雅思作文高分范文及点评

let sb. do sth. 让某人做某事

三分钟熟读或背诵本文最实用的三个句子

? In recent years, an interesting trend has emerged.

? One reason for this is that modern buildings are more practical and comfortable

to live and work in.

? After all, if we don’t continue to explore new building styles we won’t be able to

let future generations know what our period of history was like.

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